The one that I admire

Introduction:
Of course, I would like to say that my English teacher gave this task to me, but not. I can not say that cause I been taught that lies are bad.
This task was given by teacher from another grouping of learning, they're from grouping A and I'm from A+, but, honestly, I don't really feel that I'm that good in English.
Anyway, since I love to write, and since this task was perfect to me, I decided to dedicated some time and write down my feelings.
In the original task she said somewhere between 7 to 15 lines but believe me, this is SO not my kind.
So, now, after I've wrote such a long introduction, here is the one that I admire:

I admire a young boy called "Sahar". He is a 13 years old boy, and he is my best friend.
One of the most amazing thing about him is the fact that he is unique and also talented.
First of all, the thing that makes him to be happy, is seen his dad smiling.
Isn't it just an amazing fact?
I bet with you that most of the kids in our class, some of them are wishing that their father wouldn't bother them, but still.
Another amazing thing about Sahar, is his shyness.
Sahar is very coy, and I think it shows something about him.
Also, he is very smart. he doing great in math, athletic, physics, chimestry and he is just amazing in English.
He is the reason why I suddenly turns to be good in English.
I've never had above 90 in a test in the seventh grade, until he helped me, and I've got 106 in my last test.
Sahar deserves to be admired, cause he is such an unique and undescribeable.
Admire is too weak to say about him.