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אממ.. התגעגעתי ~ D :
רציתי לישאול, אתם מכירים במקרה מישהוא מיפן,? XD
טופ, בואו נעבור לעיניינים.
ספירוש, בין אם את קוראת אותי ובין אם לא, זוכרת שאיימת עליי אם נבוט?
אז במבוק הכה אותי בראש, אממ.. כן, הנקמה שלך הושלמה, XD.

habi

אנאבל שקיירוב 20/10/2013 1072 צפיות 2 תגובות
שאלום פיפול.
4 חודשים שלא כתבתי כאן.
אממ.. התגעגעתי ~ D :
רציתי לישאול, אתם מכירים במקרה מישהוא מיפן,? XD
טופ, בואו נעבור לעיניינים.
ספירוש, בין אם את קוראת אותי ובין אם לא, זוכרת שאיימת עליי אם נבוט?
אז במבוק הכה אותי בראש, אממ.. כן, הנקמה שלך הושלמה, XD.

before god created the humans, he created a white with red eyes thing.
as he looked at his lonelines , at the fact that no-one accepts him, he said to it, that he promised that he love and accept him, and that he will be his favorite, and he promised with a lowed voice; 'i will help you, and i will love you, and i wont start loving you less when i will make a
new creatures for his lovely garden'
when god created one human, he named him Adam, god said to adam; 'you can do all that you want with my garden, but do not eat from the fruit of life.'
after that, he gave him a mission 'give the animals a name'
adam started naming the animals, when he saw that strange yet beautiful creature and he named it by the name ; habi.
after adam did his mission, god started talking more-and more to him, and started completly ignoring habi.
after a while ; god made for adam , a human , hava.
hava adam tasted the fruit of life,
habi got lonely, he wanted god to see his human form, but god ignored him.
he looked at him self he touched his white long hair softely and said ; you promised…
as he started softely crying,
'i dont want to be lonely again..' he felt so lonely, and angry , he couldent understand why god loves those…foolish creatures named "humans".
he walked towords havas and adams 'house' and suddnely stopped.
he saw a beautiful creature, with green eyes and black hair.
'who are you?' she asked with a soft smile on her face.
'umm..me..im..'
she walked to him and touched his hair sofetly.
'you look so lonely…' she said.
'does this 'god' also irrates you?'
she asked . 'i hate him… ' he said as he almost started crying.
hava hugged him.
'your nice..' she said.
after a few times of their metting.
hava suddnely kissed him, she stopped, 'i love you… i really do..'
habi looked at her, he was so happy that someone accepts him.
– – –
habi entered gods room.
he looked very angry at him 'what have you done?!' he yelled at him.
'who gave you to promission to kiss her?! she not yours, so you dont have the right to do it!'
'b-but..'
habi started saying but god shouted 'silence'
'how… how do you accept me to act?!' habi started crying.
'you..you lair..you promised.."
he said while crying.

god gave habi two punishments,
one; all that he will eat will taste like dust.
two; everyone will hate you, and will try to kill you.


תגובות (2)

נחמד לקרוא את זה באנגלית…
וג-ב-ר-ת-י-!
אני חושבת שזה מגיע לך ^~^
את נטשת שוב!! ><
אוח… איך העזת?!

20/10/2013 07:19

זה כאב אישה >_<
הרגשתי כאילו שעומדת לצמוח לי בלוטה על הראש בגודל של בניין ם3 ם
וכן זה באנגלית הגרסה שלי ~ D-:

20/10/2013 07:28
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