כי אם כבר לכתוב סיפור, אז להעביר דרכו דברים. קצר, אבל לא רציתי לחכות שיעלו לי רעיונות ^^

Evil

20/07/2014 965 צפיות 2 תגובות
כי אם כבר לכתוב סיפור, אז להעביר דרכו דברים. קצר, אבל לא רציתי לחכות שיעלו לי רעיונות ^^

First Chapter
"Please! Don't kill me!" He begged as I put another blade in his lower stomach.
"I swear I'll never do it again!"
"Do what? Do you even know what have you done?"
~earlier that morning~
"Mom? Can you drop me off at school?"
My thoughts wondered away.
"Mom!"
"What? Oh, yeah yeah, sure."
"Come on Tom dress up already, even your sister is ready."
"Morning." Dan kissed me softly on my neck.
Here I am at my house near my kitchen table finishing of my toast. In front of me, my dear husband and my daughter. Yet, I'm thinking about how am I going to kill that scumbag. Weird world.
"Have a nice day dear." I said as I waved my kids goodbye.
Time to get to my clinic.

"How is our buddy?"
That cute little puppy keeps getting into trouble.
"Well, he ran after a porcupine (קיפוד) again and thats the result."
"Okay, let me take a look of him." I said with a small smile.
"Oh poor thing. How do you keep doing that?"
I started removing a spike at a time as the sweet dog moans every time.

Its quite at the clinic. I looked from left to right. No one is here.
Lets see now.
Hmm, so he is the manager of the shampoo company shead & holders.
Like putting !תוכן קשה! shampoo in the eyes of helpless bunnies, tied with no ability to remove it huh? !סוף!
We'll see about that.

"I can give you money! Lots of it! Please! Just let me go!"
"Money can not fix the things that you have done."
That assh**e. Oddly, they all think money will fix everything.
"Ready?" Finally he'll get what he deserves.
"No, please, no!"
I poured his own shampoo in his eyes, oh the irony. Now let it cook.

The final step. I took the knife and splash! His blood all over me. Great. Good thing I have my disposable sheer raincoat on.

One less evil man on the planet.


תגובות (2)

המשפט סיום מדהים.
וגם הnow let it cook
זה הסיפור הראשון שאני קוראת באנגלית ולדעתי לא צריך לעשות פרקים יותר מידי ארוכים, האורך הזה ממש בסדר.
~אני מתקשה עם השפה~
~נבוכה~

20/07/2014 05:49

    תודה (:
    עשית לי את היום D:
    לגבי השפה- אם את לא מבינה את אחת המילים אין לי בעיה להגיד לך את הפירוש ;)

    20/07/2014 16:46
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