mikenk
i like writing songs in english

about to fall

mikenk 26/08/2015 1326 צפיות 4 תגובות
i like writing songs in english

Hold me closer,
Before I fall again,
Touch me harder,
Try to understand.

This hole in my heart,
Is coming down my throat,
So please,
Don't let me fall.

Lying in the cold snow,
But nobody really knows,
Feeling the pressure going up,
And everything is about to drop,

So get me out,
And don't let me crawl,
Cause baby,
I'm about to fall.

Find my weakness,
And get me back up,
Fight it harder,
And don't stop.

Then remember,
That I need you,
This love,
Is going to stay like a tattoo.

Lying in the cold snow,
But nobody really knows,
Feeling the pressure going up,
And everything is about to drop,

So get me out,
And don't let me crawl,
Cause baby,
I'm about to fall.


תגובות (4)

I'm shocked.. seriously!! Your writing is amazing!! הקצב מעולה פשוט, החרוזים יפים, את/ה כותב/ת בצורה מקצועית ומרגשת!! ממש מוכשרת/ת! רק להלחין (או שכבר יש לך לחן) וזה שיר מושלם וממכר!

26/08/2015 05:12

That's… PRFECT!! I love your writing; it's modern and beautiful at the same time!!
You're amazing, really! I really like the name of the song, and everything else is amazing too!!!
You're a genies:)

26/08/2015 09:38

מקסים אהבתי איך הכל התחבר ממש יפה :)

27/08/2015 20:10

מתחיל יפה. הבית האחרון קצת קיטש מידי לטעמי והורס את הטעם.
כתיבה טובה.

20/09/2015 14:11
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