סליחה שלא עדכנתי הרבה זמן, הייתי עצלנית P:
אבל ברצינות תודה שהמשכתם לקרוא את הסיפור שלי ואני מקווה שנהניתם ^_^

Child of darkness: Book one, chapter one: "Do you wanna be friends?"

24/10/2013 982 צפיות 2 תגובות
סליחה שלא עדכנתי הרבה זמן, הייתי עצלנית P:
אבל ברצינות תודה שהמשכתם לקרוא את הסיפור שלי ואני מקווה שנהניתם ^_^

Today was the first day of school.

As much it does not interest you at the moment it was the day that changed my life forever.
Usually every first day in a school starts out like this: I show up, students try to mock me, I accidentlly scare the life out of them, they run away and no one in the entire school year talks or looks at me from pure fear.

Guess skills run in the family.

But back to the story, it was history lesson and each student minded they're own bussiness until a girl barged into the class panting.
Sorry I'm late!" she said between pantings".
She was wearing a boys clothes, her brown eyes sparkled in awe and a child's curiosity. She had freckles all over her body and her hair was more orange than a carott.

That was the girl that changed my life, I didn't know that at the time. I didn't pay attention, I thought she was just an average "tomboy" as people call it these days.

It's okay, but next time don't be late!" the teacher said". "Everyone, this is Kim, she just moved here from New York so I want you to be nice to her and make her feel like home" Some students snickered, some whispered to them selves.
'Huh, so her name is Kim' I thought to my self 'looks interesting enough'

And she was, in every lesson I was with her she was always loud or said witty comments here and there wich often sent her to the principal's office. Soon she was one of the boys, every time one of those "popular" girls as one calles these days she would lunch an attack against them, and by attack I mean she was throwing water balloons or shooting rubber bands at them with the rest of the boys.
but she would always sit next to me and throw looks at me at lunch like she was curious about me for some reason.

And then came the day that changed my life. I was sitting alone at lunch as usual, I wanted to throw my lunch's left overs but I tripped over a stone and fell.

Are you okay?" I heard a voice above me, it was Kim. She helped me up".
"Thank you"
"!no problem"
"-Well I have to go now"
"!Wait"
"?What do you want"
"?What's your name"
I was a bit surprised but I still answered her "Jadelyn, Jadelyn Tallman but please, call me Jade."
"!Kimberly Anderson but please, call me kim"
Is this girl mocking me? What on earth does she want?!" I thought"

"?Do you wanna be friends"


תגובות (2)

מהמם!!! מדהים!! את כתבת את כל זה לבד??? מדהים!! פשוטטטט מדהיייים!

24/10/2013 13:58

errr.. get on with the story already! lol, I liked it, but you have many typing mistakes, FIX 'EM!!! I am waiting to see how this story develops and wish you the best of luck:)

30/10/2013 13:41
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