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כן אני יודעת שלא העלתי דברים כבר שניםםם (שוב) אבל לא מצאתי את הדברים שרציתי להעלות וזה היה ממש ממש נחמד אז בסוף העלתי אותו! מקווה שתהינו! Yeah I know I didnt upload things for a long time now (again) but i didnt find the things i wanted to upload and that. But that one is really rally nice so eventually i uploaded it! i hope you'll enjoy it!

Things I write in English lessons.. 2

אליאנה 14/03/2017 1014 צפיות 4 תגובות
כן אני יודעת שלא העלתי דברים כבר שניםםם (שוב) אבל לא מצאתי את הדברים שרציתי להעלות וזה היה ממש ממש נחמד אז בסוף העלתי אותו! מקווה שתהינו! Yeah I know I didnt upload things for a long time now (again) but i didnt find the things i wanted to upload and that. But that one is really rally nice so eventually i uploaded it! i hope you'll enjoy it!

-The govrnment has recently decided to increase taxes on junk food and soft drinks, in order to fight child obesity. What’s your opinion?- (for some reason.. i dont think that what i wrote is what the teacher ment..)

Recently, kids started to eat more and more junk food and less and less healthy food. More and more children are getting fat, unhealthy and lazy. And as a person, who is used to heathy, skinny and, I have got to mantion, pretty humans… that is really weird!. In order to fight that uncomfortable situation, the government has decided to increase taxes on junk food and soft drinks. Since in my world, there are no junk food and soft drinks things,before I came here i didnt even know about these things! And when I first tried it, that was horible… So sweet and so salty! It was just disgusting… I don’t understand how you, crazy humans, are able to eat it! What happend to apples and other fruits and vegetables? Just eat what mama nature gave you! In my world, everybody eats that! Everyone! Humans, dwarfs, elve, even dragons eat things from nature! Usually, they eat dwarfs.. but.. that’s still from nature! Can’t wait to go back home and eat normal food! I even miss lembas bread! I don’t get why dwarfs say that our food is horrible… Elvish food is great! They are just odd! Anyway,your ‘government’ ..or whatever it is (I’ll just say royal.. like at home) are doing the right thing.well…I’m out of here! That’s a crazy world… And I thought that hobbits and Rohans are crazy!

Things I write in English lessons.. 2
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בבקשה תכתבי לי דמייני על נייל שיהיה מוקדש לי,בבקשה אני פשוט ממש חולה עליו

14/03/2017 00:09

רעיון חמוד ומקורי !
אנגלית ברמה גבוהה מאוד !
לדעתי ניתן לפתח את הרעיון הזה אפילו יותר יש כאן לוטנציאל לסיפור ארוך מקורי ומעניין !

14/03/2017 09:01
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