stardustsherlotte
משהו ישן חדש שכזה.

רסיסי מחשבה (או: Punctuation marks)

stardustsherlotte 15/10/2013 728 צפיות 3 תגובות
משהו ישן חדש שכזה.

Did I ever
tell you the story
?My story
Because
.I don't recall
?Would you like to hear it
?Are you listening
It's important
to keep
a focused mind
especially
when I think
.in pieces
There are little bits running in my head
and that is why
every time I get stuck on a word
.I just press enter
It's easy
this is how the words flow
this is
how
I write my life
.it is the way my way
Did I stray from the important
?idea
?What was I about to tell you
?a story you say
What story
?the story of my life
?What makes you think there is a story to be told


תגובות (3)

וואו מדהים!

15/10/2013 08:38

Wierd.
But nice…
Although there is s major lack in punctuation marks.
But i have considered the option that you wrote it this way on purpose.

15/10/2013 12:41

!first of- thanks
ושמתי לב שלא פיסקתי את הטקסט בכלל
hence the second name
וואו אני מלבלבת לי פה בשפות :)
P.S If you haven't noticed yet- I write weird, and only weird.

15/10/2013 14:30
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