Enigma

Estonian 01/08/2012 629 צפיות תגובה אחת

This is a secret,
this is a riddle,
this is a code which have to be solved.

This is a secret,
which we never see ourselves,
one day I will be there,
I will solve.

Enigma, codes that I don't understand,
thinks to unblock, to rievele.
Things that we should've guess,
only then I'd feel reliefe.
Enigma, so many codes in you,
so many things to do,
enigma.

This is a mystery,
things to discover.
Things which were hiding under cover.

This is a thing,
that we should have known.
But know I can't believe,
that it will ever be shown.

Enigma, codes that I don't understand,
thinks to unblock, to rievele.
Things that we should've guess,
only then I'd feel reliefe.
Enigma, so many codes in you,
so many things to do,
enigma.

Enigma, codes that I don't understand,
thinks to unblock, to revel.
Things that we should've guess,
only then I'd feel relief.
Enigma, so many codes in you,
so many things to do,
enigma.


תגובות (1)

A code which has to be solved.
…to reveal
….relief.
but I know, I can't believe it.

I don't know if the mistakes were on purpose or not, but you need to work on this poem. There are quite a few problems with it, if you know what I mean.

01/08/2012 07:55
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