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Welcome To HELL Chapter #3

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Chapter #3
Being kidnapped by mountains

I started seeing the bar that Ramkov was talking about; I started running and I saw a lot of demons like in the movies, for no particular reason, I entered the bar and every living creature was staring at me and some of the dead ones to. I sat next to the bar and the barman started laughing and then he said to the people at the bar "look here is another victim of Shivon's crazy experiments" and everybody growl and the barman said "I'm sorry people here don’t like that name, they were also you know who's victim." And you're two?" I asked hoping he won't choke me "no but someone from my family were" he said and groan "I sorry to hear" "Na, don’t be its fine you know everyone here want to get even with him so if I'll want revenge I can get one" "so why no one is getting his revenge?" "No one knows exactly where he lives" "what do you mean?" "What you heard, no one know exactly where he lives, no one know why but it seems that his house is moving, some sees him marking the point coming here calling every one, then going to the same spot and nothing to be found. But to other topic, do you want something to drink" "Give me just water" he poured some water and I told him that Ramkov send me, he went out for the storeroom and gave me key's and said "come with me boy" "what about my water?" "Next time, we don’t have time to waste" I went with him and showed me a some kind of a vehicle, "here this is from you!" "I can't ride this I'm too young" "first you don’t have to know how to drive when you're driving in a desert, and second this is no ordinary vehicle, you set the waypoint and its driving by itself there" "cool" "I guess that you want to go to Shivon's house, right?" "Yes, but you said that no know where he lives" "no, is said that no one know where exactly he lives, but I can put the waypoint which he was last seen" "come on, let's do that" "don’t rush me, kid you will make me angry and you don’t want to see me angry" and a little fear was seen in my face "I'm kitting, but seriously don’t rush me" he putted the waypoint and it started driving "best of lack and try to stay alive" but I was already too far to hear him.
When the vehicle stopped I saw nothing but more deserts, I checked the map and it was the correct place but nowhere to see Shivon or his house, I stepped out the vehicle and looked everywhere but nothing to see except a few mountains. But something was strange about those mountains it seems like they getting bigger by each second, it wasn't long before they started to change shapes to something that looks like a man but a lot uglier and a lot bigger. I wanted to go to the vehicle to drive back to the bar but when I looked at the vehicle it was already driving back. I rubbed my eyes to see if I'm imagining but the mountains was getting bigger so I started going fast to the side maybe I can escape them, but before I could move they were seconds before trampling me.
When they got to me they didn’t noticed that I was under them and every their footstep almost killed me. Then one of them saw me running between their legs he said to the others "what is that?" everybody was looking at me and then one offered to the others "let's give him to the boss, he'll like him" and they took me with them.


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16/01/2011 17:48

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