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Welcome To HELL Chapter #2

10/01/2011 1119 צפיות 2 תגובות
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Chapter #2
Free ride form demons

When I woke up everybody was running and screaming everywhere, I went outside to see want is going on and then I saw something so scary that scared the life out of me; it was enormous monster with a huge Club in his hand. He destroyed buildings like it was a thin branch all the people that didn’t run tried to defeat the monster but they couldn't even scratch him, and then someone yelled to me "what are you waiting for? run, there is no time to waste" he garbed my hand and we run outside the village.
When we were far from the village I saw the monster destroying the village to dust. I thought to myself what should I do now and then I remembered what the cup was telling me about the crazy man and the lava river "can you tell me which direction the lava river is?"I asked the man "yes, just go left from here all the time until you'll see it but it's far from here" "thanks, I'll find a way there" so I started walking I thought that I didn’t have anything to lose, I'm already in hell, what can be worse at least I'll get my arm back. And then it hit me, I'm just dreaming that's all, what kind of man will take arm from unconscious kid. That's it I'm just dreaming.
I walked for some time pinching myself in order to make me up but nothing was happening. I looked at the floating land for a few minutes hoping that it is a bad dream, and then I bumped into a rock and fell on me head and from that point I knew I wasn't a dream. I kept walking when I knew that I'll stay here forever then I heard noise coming for the back I looked, and I saw so king of a track stopping next to me and a man looking at me asked "you need a ride, boy?" "yes, please" " hop up" I got into the track and I saw a woman sitting next to the driver sit "what are you waiting for?" she said "we don’t have all day you know" "ahhh… sorry" and I sat "where you're heading for?" the man asked "live him alone Ramkov" She yelled at him "I'm sorry he have no manners, so where are you heading to?" "Aahhmm… the lava river Mrs.…" and she started chuckling "Ohh, we aren't married, but he wishes we would…" "Yeah, like I wish you will never stop talking" "anyway we're just working together but not more than that, I'm sorry I interrupted you what were you saying?" "Ahhhh….." "Right I forgot to intrados us…" "yeah, you forget to much" "I'm Pirosy and this is Ramkov, and why you're going to the lava river, you know if you're in the wrong place in the wrong time it's can end bed and in lava river it's almost all the time bed" "stop scaring the boy Pirosy, don’t listen to her kid, but the only problem is that we aren't going there so we can take the nearest we can, and it's not so near" "no problem, I can walk" "if it's what you want then, off we go".
We derived for some time and then Ramkov and Pirosy started fighting "there is no fish in the lava river" Ramkov yelled "but it's a river there must be some life in there like fish or planets" said Pirosy "now you will tell me that are mammals that can live under water" "it can be, you mustn't reject this opinion, right kid think about it" "what you involving him, he is a living human he can't know things like that" "if there is lava fish I'm pretty sure that they could live in lava" I said "you see" said Pirosy "but regular fish can't" "so what are you saying? Ramkov asked "that you're both right" "fare enough" they said at the same time. And then my stomach started to grumble and Pirosy handed me some bread and bottle of water "thank you" I said "you see some people can be nice" said Pirosy to Ramkov "don’t start with me, woman" answered Ramkov "now you need to rest before your trip, you can go to sleep in the back and I'll wake you when we'll arrive" Pirosy offered, and I thanked them and went to sleep.
When we arrived the spot where they couldn't go any fervor, I got out the track "just one more thing kid" said Ramkov "if you'll go straight ahead you will find a bar, go in there and say to the barman that Ramkov send you and he'll do the rest, goodbye for now kid" they driver away "take careee…" said Pirosy and they dispread to the landscape. And I started walking straight, as Ramkov said.


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12/01/2011 13:59

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