זה הספר הראשון שלי אז תכבדו את זה, מקווה שתהנו!

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Welcome To HELL Chapters #1,2

08/01/2011 1351 צפיות 8 תגובות
זה הספר הראשון שלי אז תכבדו את זה, מקווה שתהנו!

בבקשה תגיבו..

Introduction

Hey, my name is Posef Mercury, I'm sixteen years old. I live with me mom and dad and a little sister named Kate. My mom is a teacher in high school but lucky for me not in my school, my dad is also a teacher but the professor kind in the local university and the last is my sister she is 10 years old and she's going to the fourth grade.
I'm in the tenth grade. At school I'm not what you can call "the cool guy" but "nerd" or "geek" also not I'm right in the middle.
There is my best friend Keboly, we're spending most of the time together playing video games and criticize movies. And there is that girl name Nima that I like a lot!! Since the day I met her in fifth grade.
But all of this is nothing compared to what I'm going to tell you now about my little adventure.

Chapter #1
Waking up armless

As usual I woke up, brushed my teeth's, ate breakfast and went to school. On my way there I thought about the fire drill that will be today at 11 am. When I got to school I sat next to my desk and waited to the drill to begin. Usually this kind of thing isn't so exciting especially to me but this time I'm the leader of the rescue team, so yeah you can say that I'm excited about it.
In my math class the one before the drill I was looking on the clock none stop, this lesson was one of the longest lessons I can remember. In the minute it finished I run outside the class room to the principal's office to get my pullover. I wearied it and got ready to the bell to ring. At the moment he rang all the class room's doors opened and everybody started walking outside the building.
Everything was going great until the principal come me and said that he forgot the drill instructions back in his office. I went there and I searched for instructions but I couldn't find them, and then it happened I heard some strange noise coming from the wardrobe I opened it and strangely a wind came from there and then I slipped on something and I fell.
When I got to the ground nothing happened to me but after a few seconds I passed out I don’t know for how much time I was knock out but when I woke up I saw red land, and no sky just more land floating in the air, and monster everywhere I couldn't believe my eye, but the most strange part was me without an arm.
But it wasn't hurting at all and I couldn't see the hole because there weren't any kind of hole I started to panic and running everywhere. After some time I calmed down, and I started to think what to do, I don’t know where am I and I don't know where is my arm. So I started walking, I walked for about 30 minutes until I saw a village. I walked inside the village all the people there has a red skin and white hair. I kept walking until I saw a big building and writing on him in big letters "Police".
I went inside and ask the first man I saw "where am I?", and then he yelled to someone "look there is another human here" and then turned me to and said "come in we will explain everything to you" I went with him to some room and then he asked me "do you know where are you?""No" I answered "you are in what you, humans call Hell…" "Hell?! I don’t understand how I got here" "you see there are several portals batwing your world and ours. You most have entered one of them and now you're stack here""stack? How exactly I'm stack here" "well the portals are just one way, you can go inside but out you can't" "and why is that?" "If was a way back don’t you think that the demons could go to your world" "yeah, you're right, this can be a bad. And what about my arm?" "I don’t know, someone most have took it, I don’t know who" "so what should I do?" "I don’t know what you should do, I'm not a babysitter, all I can do is give cover for tonight but no more than that… wait maybe I can help you there is some weird man living next to the lava river he is very unusual. so if he saw you lying down he most took your arm for his crazy experiments, we don’t know a lot about him, but from experience I'm pretty sure that he is the on how took it, but don’t take me by my word. He lives somewhere in north-east from here a few hours walking trip, but I can't go with you God knows what he will do to me if he'll see me near his house, you're alone, but for now here's some bread and water for you and when you're finished go to sleep, you had a long day today." That night I couldn't eat or sleep when I knew that some crazy man is out there, and the idea that I lost an arm, and I don’t even want to think what he is doing with my arm right now, I drank some gulps of water and went to sleep, after a sometime I fell asleep until the next morning.

Chapter #2
Free ride form demons

When I woke up everybody was running and screaming everywhere, I went outside to see want is going on and then I saw something so scary that scared the life out of me; it was enormous monster with a huge Club in his hand. He destroyed buildings like it was a thin branch all the people that didn’t run tried to defeat the monster but they couldn't even scratch him, and then someone yelled to me "what are you waiting for? run, there is no time to waste" he garbed my hand and we run outside the village.
When we were far from the village I saw the monster destroying the village to dust. I thought to myself what should I do now and then I remembered what the cup was telling me about the crazy man and the lava river "can you tell me which direction the lava river is?"I asked the man "yes, just go left from here all the time until you'll see it but it's far from here" "thanks, I'll find a way there" so I started walking I thought that I didn’t have anything to lose, I'm already in hell, what can be worse at least I'll get my arm back. And then it hit me, I'm just dreaming that's all, what kind of man will take arm from unconscious kid. That's it I'm just dreaming.
I walked for some time pinching myself in order to make me up but nothing was happening. I looked at the floating land for a few minutes hoping that it is a bad dream, and then I bumped into a rock and fell on me head and from that point I knew I wasn't a dream. I kept walking when I knew that I'll stay here forever then I heard noise coming for the back I looked, and I saw so king of a track stopping next to me and a man looking at me asked "you need a ride, boy?" "yes, please" " hop up" I got into the track and I saw a woman sitting next to the driver sit "what are you waiting for?" she said "we don’t have all day you know" "ahhh… sorry" and I sat "where you're heading for?" the man asked "live him alone Ramkov" She yelled at him "I'm sorry he have no manners, so where are you heading to?" "Aahhmm… the lava river Mrs.…" and she started chuckling "Ohh, we aren't married, but he wishes we would…" "Yeah, like I wish you will never stop talking" "anyway we're just working together but not more than that, I'm sorry I interrupted you what were you saying?" "Ahhhh….." "Right I forgot to intrados us…" "yeah, you forget to much" "I'm Pirosy and this is Ramkov, and why you're going to the lava river, you know if you're in the wrong place in the wrong time it's can end bed and in lava river it's almost all the time bed" "stop scaring the boy Pirosy, don’t listen to her kid, but the only problem is that we aren't going there so we can take the nearest we can, and it's not so near" "no problem, I can walk" "if it's what you want then, off we go".
We derived for some time and then Ramkov and Pirosy started fighting "there is no fish in the lava river" Ramkov yelled "but it's a river there must be some life in there like fish or planets" said Pirosy "now you will tell me that are mammals that can live under water" "it can be, you mustn't reject this opinion, right kid think about it" "what you involving him, he is a living human he can't know things like that" "if there is lava fish I'm pretty sure that they could live in lava" I said "you see" said Pirosy "but regular fish can't" "so what are you saying? Ramkov asked "that you're both right" "fare enough" they said at the same time. And then my stomach started to grumble and Pirosy handed me some bread and bottle of water "thank you" I said "you see some people can be nice" said Pirosy to Ramkov "don’t start with me, woman" answered Ramkov "now you need to rest before your trip, you can go to sleep in the back and I'll wake you when we'll arrive" Pirosy offered, and I thanked them and went to sleep.
When we arrived the spot where they couldn't go any fervor, I got out the track "just one more thing kid" said Ramkov "if you'll go straight ahead you will find a bar, go in there and say to the barman that Ramkov send you and he'll do the rest, goodbye for now kid" they driver away "take careee…" said Pirosy and they dispread to the landscape. And I started walking straight, as Ramkov said.


תגובות (8)

למה באנגלית??

09/01/2011 15:33

למה לא?

09/01/2011 19:51

כי מי שלא יודע ליקרוא איגלית ??
וחוץ מיזה למי יש כוח ליקרוא באנגלית כיף ליקרוא סתם ככה להנאה ובאגלית זה סתם קשה

09/01/2011 20:00

זה סיפור מעולה! מאוד מעניין ומותח. לדעתי זה שהוא באנגלית דווקא מוסיף.

09/01/2011 20:13

הנה משהו שמבין, אם אתה לא יכול לקרוא אנגלית אז אל תקרא. לפי דעתי סיפור בנגלית יותר טוב.

נ.ב. מחר אני יעלה את הפרק השני

09/01/2011 20:18

קודם כל אני בת ודבר שני רק נתתי לך הצעה לתרגם את הסיפור אם את לא רוצה לא צריך!!

11/01/2011 16:42

מצטער עניין הבן/בת ואז למה לעשות עניין

11/01/2011 16:58

מה קשור , טוב לא רוצה לתרגם את תתרגם אבל יש כאלה שלא יודעים ליקרוא ובכך שאתה כותב באנגלית אתה מקטין את כמות הצפיות בסיפורים שלך אני למשל לא כלכך יודעת ליקרוא אנגלית וביגלל זה לא יכולתי ליקרוא את הסיפור שלך

11/01/2011 20:42
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